User blog comment:MerchantofDeath/Conventional Tactics: Questions, answers, and advice to make the story better./@comment-2085225-20101019201942

Well, dude, I did what you requested, and here are my findings: Your story reminds me of Conviction, in the way that the hero is out of the agency, but this last one hunts him down. What you might need to give it an SC/CoD feeling is that he mostly goes on his own, with the last tech available (From SC:1 to Conviction its been the same), and if you make the perecution scene longer and with an Assasins Creed feel, in the way that the character goes on the roofs and the bad guys try to follow him, would be nice. Also, the fight scenes could be more personal and viseral, like when you take out an enemy with your hands on Conviction. Your fanfic is ok, these tips are just for you to keep them in mind as you write along, so you give the story the feeling you want it to have.