Talk:Nightfall/@comment-98.116.25.28-20130824070652/@comment-98.116.25.28-20130824072506

So for my "friendly" review:

This page is pretty good. You've shown a good amount of effort on artwork and weaponry, 900.

The only thing I would say is to elaborate on the plot. Like, how did the nuclear weapon have such massive capabilities and the reasoning for It's launch?

Besides that, dis = 8/10

k peace, b4 I'm anon banned.

- USMC Lance