Talk:Zero Hour/@comment-4514662-20130502001526/@comment-1978336-20130502145359

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And it's not finished yet; the next part should be up within the next week or two.

As for you, it's good to hear that you want to use your stories to convey emotion. The vast majority of fanfiction authors write for the purpose of self gratification, which rarely results in good stories. The purpose of a story is to entertain the reader, not the person writing it. The sooner you can grasp that, the faster you will progress as a writer.