Talk:Survival/@comment-4559524-20110831220643

How about constructive criticism? Hopefully, it will do. I'm not trying to hurt you and your FF, but constructive criticism helps, by improving the person being criticized.

The spelling and grammar are... not the best. Yes, I know you said elsewhere on the wiki that spelling and grammar aren't your best, and I honor that because we are not the same. But improving stuff like that would ABSOLUTELY help with readers and whatnot.