Talk:Zero Hour/@comment-4514662-20130502001526

This is phenomenal. Wow, I could not stop reading. I thought I was the only one who wanted to convey emotion in my stories but wow, you make the reader feel pity for the characters.

What's even more realistic is the vivid, gruesome description of the killing and suffering, and the effects on the characters, which are very realistic (Ex. "Please God, let it end soon. Just please, let this end). I thought I was the only one who did that as well lol.

The point is, amazing!!!!!!