Talk:Special Operations: Enduring Freedom/@comment-4514662-20130612040827

Man, this is great. Fucking awesome. Read the whole damn thing and will read

Just the comedy and then just the random ambush and the fear of not knowing what's gonna happen next.

But a few advices:

1. Some grammar errors here and there but nothing to mess up the story.

2. ''"Thats Lieutenant John Sanderson, we call him Sandy." He said. "He's the leader of our battalion, strange he came with us this time 'round." ''See Lieutenant Colonel's lead battalions, man. Regular Lieutenant's are Platoon Leaders or Executive Officers (XOs) in companies.

Besides, very nice.

8.5/10 so far.