User blog comment:My Wunderwaffle iz missin/LANCER Project Prequel/@comment-24476373-20101211205841

Cool storyline so far. But a few things.

1. Ariel is 22? That seems a little old if you ask me. I would think she would have gotten her own house by now if she was 22. Just sayin'.

2. I like how you made a back story for Jake. (The Hollywood artist thing, and being able to make meals from the least likely of things. He can cook, unlike me)

3. You may want to change Spetsnaz to Russian Army, as Spetsnaz is special forces, like a russian version of the Green Berets or Navy SEALs.

4. Another character, if you don't mind.

Name: Alexei Girasev

Affiliation: Lancer (He doesn't have a LANCER outfit) (He is also a rogue Russian Soldier)

Weapons: AK-103 w/ M203, Flashlight, & Red Dot Scope (Attached via VFR-AK rail System), MP-446 Viking Pistol w/ Flashlight, Semtex bomb (It is more like C4, for your sake)

Specialty: Rifleman/Intelligence/Grenadier (He has a grenade launcher on an assault rifle, and since he defected, he knows some of the things the russians are more likely to do, should the LANCERs encounter the Russian Army.)

Birth: Leningrad, USSR, on November 23rd, 1981

Age: 29

Bio: An average Russian Soldier who defected to the US when General Shepherd's Purge ended and the Russian Terrorist Vladimir Makarov was arrested by the FSB. He supplies on-the-spot intelligence about the russians, though only small things, such as how they patrol an area, and how to evade said patrol sequence. Used to be a College student, and enlisted in the Russian Army when he heard of the massacre at Zakhaev International Airport. Personally assassinated Makarov's 2 accomplices, Pharaoh and Anatoly. (Pharaoh was the driver of the ambulance in No Russian, I just checked on the COD wiki.)