Talk:Call Of Duty Black Ops 3 Debut Trailer/@comment-5670680-20130514055000

For a first work, this is a dive into the deep, but I can see you can swim. IMO there will ve no bo3, but for a fanfic is it still a sequel do it takes a lot of risks with it. But i think this story is actually great, the concept had spoken in my head for a few years (even before i joined fanfic) Some writing skills like dicersity of words could make it easier to read, but mine arent also that great. I know some people will disagree with the story as it is very controversial be keep going ;)